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You sat there weeping; torn bits of fabric lay all around you. 'How could my stepsister's ever be so mean? I spent ages on this dress and now I can't go to the ball and dance with Prince Alfred.'
Suddenly you felt a hand on your shoulder, "Shh, Cinder[Name]. With my help you'll still be able to make it to the ball."
You looked up towards the voice and your eyes went wide. Sitting beside you was a handsome young man. He had sandy blonde hair and deep emerald eyes, which felt like they were pulling you in. Then you saw his eyebrows, bushy but somehow the complemented his face. Your heart lurched and felt like it was trying to get closer to him
"Uhhhh…" you said intelligently.
"Shh…" he said putting a finger to your lips, "I know this must be strange for you, but I'm your fairy godfather. I'm here to help you get to the ball and meet your prince. You can call me, Arthur."
'Holy Shit, I'm dreaming, I must be! A really hot guy is telling me he's my fairy godfather! Or…' "Am I high?" you ask innocently.
"No your bloody not high!" he exclaimed in annoyance.
"Fine…are you?"
"Am I what?"
"I am not bloody high you git!"
"Fine, but let me ask you this; what would you think if a hot guy came and sat beside you saying that he was your fairy godfather?" you ask eyes narrowed.
"Do you want my help or not, love?" he asked in annoyance, obviously not catching the hot comment.
"Um…sure? But what are you going to do?"
"Well," he said standing up; "first I'm going to get you out of those rags, love."
'Holy Shit!!! He's going to RAPE me!' you thought, while your inner voices fought over if that was awesome or not.
"After I'm done with you, you'll be the best dressed girl at the ball," he said, reaching into his sleeve. "Now where did I put that wand?" You watched in amazement as he looked in both sleeves, down the front of his shirt, and shook his leg looking for his 'wand'. "Ah, now I remember!" your eyes got wider as he pulled a long stick out of thin air.
"Huhmmana huhmmana huhmmana."
"Now, love," he said offering his hand to you, which you gladly took, "let's fix those rags of yours." And with a wave of his wand, your rags transformed into a [color] fairy tale dress.
"How did you-?"
"Magic. Now let's get a carriage for you to take to the ball. That pumpkin looks about right," he said pointing at your pumpkin patch. "Now for the magic words…" and with that he began to sing:

Salagadoola mechicka boola bibbidi-bobbidi-boo
Put 'em together and what have you got

Salagadoola mechicka boola bibbidi-bobbidi-boo
It'll do magic believe it or not

Salagadoola means mechicka booleroo
But the thingmabob that does the job is

Salagadoola menchicka boola bibbidi-bobbidi-boo
Put 'em together and what have you got
bippity-boppity bippity-boppity bippity-boppity-boo

Once he was done the carriage was ready and drawn by 6 white horses. He turned towards you and stifled a chuckle. You weren't even attempting to hide your surprise. Your mouth was open as wide as it could go and your eyes were the size of the dinner plates you polished every day.
"Holy Mother of Pearl!" you exclaimed still gaping. "How the freak did you do that?!"
"Magic," he said chuckling, his face was close to yours. You blushed furiously.
"And why would you go to such lengths for a girl like me?"
'Because I'm in love with you!' "Because you're a good person, Cinder[Name]."
You heart beats faster when he says your name with such love, and your face heats up. "Thank you…Arthur," you say smiling. You kiss his cheek and he goes bright red. "Um, would it be too much to ask you to be my escort to the ball? I mean, only if you want to and you've done so much for me already so it's okay if you don't want to."
"I'd love too," He said smiling while blushing a red that would have put a fire engine to shame. He held out his arm and you took it. As the two of you walked to the carriage, his clothes were magically replaced with a suit. You blushed as you snuck a peek at him. He was so handsome. "Now you'll be able to dance with that Prince of yours."
Your heart dropped when he said that. "Y-yeah…I can't wait," you said mustering as much enthusiasm as you could. You didn't want to hurt his feelings and tell him that you really didn't care about the ball anymore, especially after he went through so much trouble for you. Little did you know, your words were like daggers going through his heart.
The two of you chatted during the entire carriage ride and you felt more and more drawn to him. Once the two of you reached the castle he opened your door and helped you out. The men around you were staring; jaws dropped, and were envious of the man whose arm you were on. The woman around you stared at the number that you were being escorted in by. As you went in you felt like you had just walked into a storybook. Well until you saw the prince.
"Dudes and Dudettes, thanks for coming to my stellar party!" the loud mouth exclaimed from the balcony. "I hope to find my future wife in this awesome crowd! You know, my Mary Jane to my Spiderman!"
You internally groan. This guy was the guy that you were fanning over for the last couple days! You felt like you were going to be sick. 'Well at least I got to meet Arthur,' you thought to yourself.
"Would you do me the honour of this dance, love?"
"You looked over at Arthur, who was bowing deeply. You cursed and said, smiling, "I would love too."
The two of you danced through song after song. You both never even noticed when a song changed; they all seemed to merge into one another. Not that you really cared though. You were in the arms of a man who cared about you and you cared about him more then he knew.
"Um, Cinder[Name?"
"Yes, Arthur?"
"I was wondering if-"
"May I cut in, dude?" Neither of you had time to respond before the Prince swept you away from Arthur. He treated you rougher then Arthur and you didn't like it, but since he was the prince you went along with it…this one time. "Man, you're such a graceful dancer Mrs…"
"[Last Name], Cinder[Name] [Last Name]," you said as he stepped on you toe and smudged the glass slipper Arthur conjured up for you. You internally wince, if he wasn't the prince you would have killed him.
"Cinder[Name], such a pretty name! Hey, Cinder-baby, do you believe in love at first sight?"
Without really thinking of the meaning of the question, and still thinking of Arthur watching the two of you from the corner of the room, you answer the young prince, "I didn't until tonight."
"Righteous! So you'll be my Mary-Jane to my Spiderman?"
"Well I-wait. WHAT?!?!?!" you exclaim
"Yeah dude, will you marry me?"
You looked towards Arthur. His eyes were filled with hurt and loneliness and they tugged at your heart. He gave you a weak smile, as if to say 'go ahead marry him I won't stop you if that's what you want'. Then he turned and left the ballroom.
You looked up towards the smiling prince. "I'm sorry, I can't be your MJ, but I'm sure you'll find her one day. But it's not me." With that you left the flabbergasted prince behind and went off searching for Arthur.
You charged out of the ballroom and searched for Arthur. You caught sight of him near the royal pond. "Arthur!" you called to him, as you ran you and glomped him.
"Arthur, I'd like to thank you! Because of you I met my Prince Charming and my one true love all wrapped up in one!" You exclaim, hugging he from the front now.
"Congratulations, love. I'm happy for you. I'm sure you and Alfred will be happy together," he said sadly.
"I'm not talking about Alfred, silly!"
"Then, who are you talking-" Before he could finish his sentence you cut him off with a passionate kiss. He didn't return in at first but then took complete dominance in it. After a few moments of pure bliss, you broke away.
"I was talking about you Arthur. I love you."
"I-I love you too, Cinder[Name]."

Extended Ending

"Lost the girl of my dreams to a tea drinking, fairy-boy…" grumbled the Prince.
"Your highness, are you okay?"
"I'm fine. Now shut up and bring me a burger."
Okay, this is one of my first EnglandXreaders and i know it sucks
But when I was browsing youtube and i found this song again
I HAD to write this story

Love, CinderMariah

Story is mine
Hetalia belongs to whoever it belongs to
You belong to your fairy godfather England
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LampTroll Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this!! IT DOESN'T FREKINN SUCK!:nosebleed: 
OnlyInTheForest Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
CinderAllie.... *remembers the mice from the original disney cinderella* heh so close..
Queenofspadesx2 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
High princesses, tea drinking fairy-boys, and a prince who just wants true love and a burger.

This is SO MUCH better than the disney movie!!
OnlyInTheForest Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
Right? XD
AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Edited Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
CinderKatie, LOLOLOLOLOLOL When she said Cinder I was like: THE LUNAR CHRONICLES! The relized as in CinderKatie and I was like: FAQ.

Is it bad that I can imagine Arthuer jumping around waving a wand sining Bippity Boopity Boo? Like I CAN'T STOP LAUGNG XD
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Same name and reaction!!!~
AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Katie buddy?
AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Katie buddies. fist bump icon 
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Glomp ChaseML :glomp: 
AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
APH France: Neko!France  I don't even know,....Because,France.
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
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GumaBall Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm Cindercela
killerkatie23x23 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Cinderkathleen my parents are dumbasses I guess.....
AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Your name bruh. Katie and Katie
ZackFair13 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
cinderclare who the hell gave there child cinderclare ? 
Exorcest Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
CinderAlma? Not bad actually...
chocolatefangirl Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014
hmm... CinderAndrea?? lol xd
Kirby741 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
CinderHanna, huh, this is what happens when parents get too creative or don't really care.
americanlover152 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
E-Sane Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
CinderEliza. Who the fuck names their child CinderEliza?
KiannaCat Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
EeveeIshAwesome Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
CinderBrianna, who would ever name their child something like that?... Apparently mine in this story XD
ilovegamtav Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OHMYGOGILOVETHIS i love Cinderella and I love England so this is AWESOME!!!!!!!! CX
MixedMuttNeko-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Lost the girl of my dreams to a tea drinking, fairy-boy…" grumbled the Prince.
"Your highness, are you okay?"
"I'm fine. Now shut up and bring me a burger."

Mafuyu-Fake-CriesInner Me: Man! I wanna laugh and cry and fangirl but I cant talk!crying 
E-Sane Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And now I'm laughing. Dat Typo!!!!!
BeautifulChaos99 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tee Hee... "CinderShelby"... Hee Hee.

I laughed till I cried, then I laughed some more. Love it so much!
MiraakTheDragonborn Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student General Artist


"Huhmmana huhmmana huhmmana."

Huminahuminahumina back at ya.
RannokKirkland Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist
Best Cinderella story ever and I love the extended ending.
myksz Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DAWW, this is sooo cute! I could just imagine Arthur singing the Fairy Godmther's spell! *SQUEE!*
DibstaRP Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
As much as I love America, I love England more in this one ^W^
gothicprincess18 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
well, im in the fetal position rocking back and forth because NOW IM IMAGINING IGGY AND THE FLYING MINT BUNNY SINGING THAT SPELL!!!!

its pretty freaking awesome. :iconflyingmintbunnyplz: <----- NIEN IDEA THAT WOULD WORK
SyrenSong66 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Ah, but it all works out in the end.
HetaliaRules99 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i lost it at the end and I was siting in my room being quiet and such and then I fall off my bed laughing so hard" Lost the girl of my dreams to a tea-drinking, fairy-boy"........ HAHAHAHAHAHA X'D
vocaloidanimefan Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well Alfred you know fairies are more awesome to me X3 I loved the story! :squee:
skating-wally Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
AWWWW!!! so cuuute! I loved this so much! (when you said "I'm sorry, I can't be your MJ, but I'm sure you'll find her one day. But it's not me."I totally thought of Micael Jackson :D)
Queenofspadesx2 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
Omg :D Your comment left me laughing all day XD
Babykurlzz Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
This reminded me of a performance at my school. They told this guy(while the play was happening) to be the fairy god mother of the story and when they narrorrated it, they said "And so the fairy god mother-" "FATHAH!!!!!!" I laughed my butt off thinking of Iggy yelling that out during this story.
PandaChick0508 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
chibi-chocolate123 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
...fairy godfather?



MOVVVVVING ON! I do think this is funny! :XD: England singing Bibbidy Bobbidi Boo!
TheDarkPoetShallRise Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
Wait how did Alfred know Artuhr was a fairy? By the way great story i loved it!
TheMysteriousPoet Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD *dies at ending*
gremilnsinthecrypt Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Student General Artist
No now shut up and bring me my burger ..!!haha genius!!
heaven-is-lonely Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Awkward...cause he's my fairy godfather...
Blindsnow77 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
CinderRose.....New warrior cat name! -Is shot- XD I love the story, poor America, he'll find his Mary Jane someday. >u<
TheConsultingNerd Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THAT EXTENDED ENDING. I buried my head in my dolphin pillow pet to keep from waking up the whole house with my laughter. I won't up my cat, though. She wasn't to happy about that... But seriously, one of your FIRST EnglandXReaders? This was bloody brilliant! I have never read anything like it, and it seemed to draw me in from the very first words. I absolutely adore this. You are amazing and brilliant and wonderful. *hugs*
LenPwnsLyn Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Student
I love this story so much so cute~! :iconloveloveplz:
samikira Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist
omg Alfred a burger seriously omg iggy is so like amazing even in a fairy tale
Kinky-Kirara Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:iconhurrhurrplz: he's just as sexy,even if he is in a frilly fairy outfit.
ItsLandOfOOOTime Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
America, just shut up and eat your burger LOL loved this :D
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